Wednesday, 20 May 2015
The sleck fast powerful jet ski begins to zip through the white caped waves. It looks like a dirt bike skidding across the foamy fericous waves. It sounds like a farting engine through the loud spleashing sea. The ocean looks like a light, inky, turqoise colour, that shimmers under the jet ski. the jet ski flies through the air like a tiny boat with wings and glides like a flying paper plane then lands smoothly, on the calm, gentle surface of the water its ocean runway. BY TYRESE
Tuesday, 12 May 2015
the tortoise
The tremendous creature is crawling out of the arid dark brown hole as slowly as a snail. The setting sun casts a luminous light over the tinted sky, and across the calm ocean. The tortoise gently crawls out of its warm nest. The crackling sand across the beach sinks in like quick sand. The tinted bright light shines over the tortoise.
Wednesday, 22 April 2015
Complex Sentences
WALT write complex sentences by adding subordinating conjunctions.
1. I go as fast as a spinning tornado.
2. I go as fast as a spinning tornado so that I can get to the other country even faster.
1. Tomorrow we are having an ANZAC Memorial Service at school.
2. Tomorrow we are having an ANZAC Memorial Service at school because it's a day to remember the fallen soldiers.
1. We are in the ALL writing group.
2. We are in the ALL writing group so that we can be geniuses at writing whenever we write.
I LOVE TRAVELLING
I absolutely love travelling because I like seeing new places, meeting new people and most of all I like the plane ride.
I love feeling like I'm flying like a gliding bird through the windy, fluffy clouds. It's like I'm on top of the world. I go as fast as a spinning tornado.
As the plane lands I can hear a loud scratching sound when we hit the hard, solid ground.
Monday, 20 April 2015
Thursday, 12 February 2015
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